We were not impressed with the feedback we received on our final draft so we decided to make go back and edit it to make it better.
The main problem was the addition of the news report. well, people liked the audio of the news report however they did not understand why we hand included the clips of the news reporter as they said it did not make sense and it looks as if it was filmed poorly as the top of his head was cut off, even though this was our intention.
Never the less, we decided to respond to our audiences feedback to make the sequence more entertaining to them by meeting their needs.
so the first thing we did was take out the footage of the news reporter and just leave the audio. we also added more audio of the news reporter talking.
We also received feedback regarding the news paper sequences, saying that it looked as if we just had a camera and moved it across the news papers. So to counter this we jumbled up the order of the newspapers and added stills to give it the X-Files feel we were going for.
We also had feedback on the text, the audience suggested we make it smaller. So we did this and it turned out to be very effective.
Again we exported it in HD to make it look more professional.
So with these new changes, here is the final draft!